The pitch

Idea 1- At the beginning we are filming the main character riding a horse from two different points it has a classic relaxing music in the background then the main character leans against a fence and lights up a fag with narration of her talking about her life. It then continues to then show us her double life as she has had a posh up bringing but she chooses to rebel. there is narration continuing through this also consists of an upbeat music as she walks to the front door. It then goes on to her introducing her friends every time she says her friends name it freezes on them hitting some one and this is the basic idea of are first idea.

Feed back- we got good feed back for this one saying that it is a good idea and that we should go for this one.

Idea 2- Idea two is a basic version of the first where it basically shows the true environment that a working class teenager class D/E has to live in and shows the impact on there life. This idea was not thought through a lot and we decided to scrap it.

Feed back- We didn't get much feed back as they was not keen on are ideas and think idea 1 would be produced better.